Wednesday, February 12, 2014

Trifextra Writing Challenge-Week 102

My devotion to the man in my life has gone terribly wrong. The agony that has gripped my whole body is hard to fathom. I don't think I will be the same again.

8 comments:

  1. If it's agony, best not to be the same, especially if it's physical!

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  2. No, it's emotional, thank goodness.

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  3. Love can be devastating when it goes wrong. You convey the intensity well, here.

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  4. This is dark and sad.. well written..

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  5. A great compliment, thank you.

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  6. We are never the same after we love.. It hurts when it falls short of what we want, expect deserve.. But we are never the same.

    Very nice job.

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  7. Anonymous2/16/2014

    You captured the intensity of the pain so well.

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